Horrible Gift

This is a really cute adorable pic,
lets start on the positive,
I love how the back ground matches with seashell and the pose is a lot more creative than I could do!!
I know everyone doesnt like this part, but heres the negatives,
im thinking u dont have a tablet, so this is hard, but try to make the lines straighter, so its not wobbly, and make the joints, knees elbows, etc, less curvy and mmmore ummm jointy?? U should work on those for nao <3but u can try to work on the hair, to get it more seperate and more stringy i guess, and the coloring, u should probs shade a bit, but that doesnt rly atter for now. And yea ciao