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Saikai Pokemon Trainer OC ( colored! )

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There is my character Saikai, she is my Pokemon trainer OC
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I definitely like where you are going with this in terms of originality. Your art skill needs a little bit of work, though. The problem I have noticed is that the arms are waayyyy too short and it looks to me as if she doesn't have any elbow joints whatsoever. Her body looks completely stiff and her clothing is missing detail. Also, Her neck is completely out of proportion due to it being too large. Making several errors in your artwork does not mean that you are terrible at it, but it gives you great potential of improving and becoming a better artist. You can do it and don't give up!

Cheers!
-thewafflefactory